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Last night was the first time
i went to sleep sad
I woke up alone
With more to be had

We were talking
you seemed to refrain
from hearing my heart
calling your name

I will stop caring
and give you your space
I wish i was what you wanted
In this damn place

I know that im far away
But i care to much
to forget like you think i will
your like my warm touch

I cant make you go away
Your in the back of my mind
I think about you everyday
Your heart i must find

I will look for ever
Till the day that i die
Ill wait for you dear
This isnt a lie.
©2004-2009 ~justme96
:iconjustme96:

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i wrote this...sometimes pple dont want to feel the love you give them...oh well.

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:iconspazthepoet:
very good michelle, i remember u read this to me on the fone. i still love it!! keep em coming!

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*puts sticker over Duffman's mouth*
"Duffman... can't breath!"
:iconhereticschizoid:
very nice! It's sad but it also feels uplifting. Nice tone you created :nod:

:hug: great work :aww:

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Donate 20 grains of rice playing a word game... it's addictive
"Kind words do not cost much. Yet they accomplish much." -Blaise Pascal.
:iconairmega23:
I like this poem. It has a good flow to it. You did a good job of keeping your purpose clear, while also making the poem sound nice.

Keep it up

Greg

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
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holy shit i can relate to this so much.. i jus wish i would have thought to write something like this, man i love it

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you!!!!! you are the reason i destroy planets, becuz of you r cuteness i get all pissed off and stuff...

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